Not fond of the lighting angle on the girl. maybe if a soft diffused light were added to her right side? I like the shadows on her body, dress and shoulder but the shadow on her left eye is what bothers me I think. You got the light bulb very nicely though and nothing seems too blown out to me. The clarity is good too.
Good concept. Unfortunately, it loses much of its impact on account of the poor focus. You're obviously got the creativity (which is the hard part) - just got to get the technicals right.
The side lighting is a bit harsh for the model and her soft dress. It is casting a bright shine on the right side of her face. Would like to be able to see a little more detail on the left eye. It might have worked w/out the lightbulb and same model as neg. space is good here. Softer light would give the "little girl and pink dress" look a bit more childlike features. Does that make sense? It's not a bad photograph by any means! :)
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