Mr. Veggie is interesting to look at. Technically he has some hot spots on him which can be eliminated by moving the light a bit further from the subject. There are some spots in the background that are distracting as it takes away from the intended all-white background.
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background7, Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing6, Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 8, Total Averaged Rating7. Autool It looks as though you over sharpened this and got a lot of bright unatural edges. Nice imagination.
Concept is a good one. Are you familiar with the line of children's books that illustrates this way? I think it's called Play with Your Food.
In this case, I think the execution needs some tweaking. The light is very bright, too harsh for me. Then there's the roaming eye. LOL. The eye closest to the left of the photo looks right at me, but I can't see the pupil on the other eye and I get the impression that it's looking the other way. That takes away from the realistic portrayla of a face. The edges on the mouth also seem a bit jagged. Can't tell if that's JPG compression or actual cutting. +1 for creativity and obvious effort. 6, just-married
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