A different take on the challenge. I believe it would have worked better with a T-shot I think (or whatever you would call it - I'm not a golfer) - or maybe a put... I just want to get the ball and club out of the grass...
Overall, I like the shot. I think a tighter crop on the right would help it feel more balanced. As it is, there is a lot of space to the right. Not enough to put the clubhead and ball on the "third line" or to be negative space, but enough that it is noticeably empty.
Great take on the challenge. The only thing that I would have done different? I think I would have tried to shoot this when the background would have been lit better. I do think your white balance is a touch off as the ball looks a little blue to me.
TC