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The sprinklers did it.
The sprinklers did it.
HollywoodHoebag


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Challenge: Negative Space III (Basic Editing)
Camera: Kodak DC210
Date: Jun 14, 2007
Galleries: Children
Date Uploaded: Jun 16, 2007

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Place: 368 out of 374
Avg (all users): 3.6796
Avg (commenters): 3.0000
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Canon EOS-5D Mark II
Canon EF 24-105mm f/4.0 L IS
 06/26/2007 04:39:37 AM
Could use better focus on the girl and more of the bg.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
Canon EOS R5 Mark II
Canon RF 24-105mm f/4.0 L IS USM
06/25/2007 01:30:32 AM
Fit Challenge Criteria: 0/2
Contrast/Color: 1/2
Composition: 0/2
Photo Quality: 1/2
My Subjective Affinity: 0/2

The negative space does not complement the main subject, nor is it a "wow" factor on it's own. The contrast is very flat and the colors dull. The angle the photo was taken at is too awkward for this shot. The centered composition doesn't help either, as well as the cut off toes. The image has very soft focus.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
Nikon D80
Nikon AF Zoom-Nikkor 18-135mm f/3.5- 5.6G ED DX
 06/23/2007 12:54:59 PM
Sorry, don't see the negative space
  Photographer found comment helpful.
Canon EOS-5D Mark IV
Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8 L II
 06/22/2007 11:58:40 PM
Good aspect for this shot. Perhaps bump the contrast a little. Skin tone looks a touch blue (not the tongue, lol). Grey backgound doing that.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
Canon EOS-5D Mark III
Canon EF 17-40mm f/4.0 L USM
 06/22/2007 10:30:22 PM
theres not much negative space here, not wowing me
  Photographer found comment helpful.
Canon EOS-5D Mark II
Canon EF 24-105mm f/4.0 L IS
 06/22/2007 03:12:37 PM
Bravo - the best pic of the lot - did you think about it by yourself or did someone help you?
Canon EOS-10D
Canon EF 50mm f/1.8 II
 06/21/2007 01:02:54 AM
Where's the negative space? Colors are muted and dirty, looks like a snapshot.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
Canon EOS-400D Rebel XTi
Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6
 06/20/2007 06:40:44 PM
Focus and lighting are not sharp in this photo, looks too much like a snapshot. Background/negative space - does not enhance the photo.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
Canon EOS-50D
Canon EF 28-135mm f/3.5-5.6 IS USM
 06/20/2007 01:50:07 AM
Okay, well I am no expert so keep that in mind, but for me there should be less subject and more neg. space. I like the interesting angle and the expression is great, composition could use some work IMHO. 5
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