Hi Judi, I like the positioning of your model, I like the freedom suggested in her arms and it’s a nice backdrop. I like how the model and the background share the space quite well.
IMO the saturation is pushed too high, the green grass looks almost fluorescent and a bit out of place compared to the trees above. Perhaps a slight rotation of the model to her left would have allowed more morning sun to rake across her. The title doesn’t really sit well with me, perhaps because when I think of alone I think of sadness/darkness etc. Not the pleasant freedom that she is experiencing here.
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