As one of your "10's", I protest that this photo was underrated! A beautiful portrait, and one of a small number in this challenge that said "pure" to me without reading the caption.
Exquisite detail. Its magical how the whole face is in focus, including the fringe - you can see each strand of hair! - and yet the hair a little messy is blurred! The colour of the eyes is amazing and the lighting is great. Great choice of colour for the background. I'm just not sure if the cropping is exactly right.
nice eyes and smile and a few freckles. I like this model. Good portrait. You could ajust the skin tone so it wouldn't be so pink or red. I know its time of year for sunburns.