the shot is technically well done. However, there is little in it that compels me to look beyond the actual shot and see the "story" or what is captivating about it.
A lovely shot of a child completely absorbed in her own world. Some might consider the bins in the background a bit of a distraction but imo these thing exist in real life and to me they add to the candid nature of the image rather than detract
Good try but there is way too much in this image...maybe a closer crop to get rid of that...plus a bit of her face to show some of her emotion at that moment.