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Originally posted by ambaker:
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This is so great! I looks so nostalgic. Like it was taken in the 40's or something!
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she looks like she wants to be anywhere but there.. Great capture.
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reminds me of Manet. maybe that's neat image? you perhaps went too far with it, though I do kinda dig the painting effect. 7 You know, I was worried about neat image on the face, but now I'm starting to think she just looks like that. bump to 9
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Wow she looks so bored :) nice tones thou
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Reminds me of an image from a book or magazine. Just very dreamy and thoughtful.
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good focus and composition
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Good shot of what appears as a person day dreaming at the job. The white labels on the bottles at her cheek are a little distracting
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OK, I'm guessing that she realised she had a camera pointing at her but the lovely distant look in her eyes makes the viewer feel they are intruding into her private dream moment. Lovely B&W conversion
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I really like this candid. I like the post processing technique and the model is beautiful.
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This is an interesting portrait. I like the composition, with the rack of mugs in the foreground leading the eye towards your subject.
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Very calming and yesteryear feel to this. Good work. 7
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I like the processing on this.
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Her face sticks out to me as looking as though it has been over-adjusted. Her eyes and forehead look like they were lightened, and it gives her a "bandit mask" tanline appearance.
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looks a bit overprocessed :-(
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I really like this image. i think, and hope, that is a true candid.
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almost a 50s feel here, very vintage, 7
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Composition doesn't quite work for me. The shot is wonky and the bottles right by the face takes away from her expression. The eye finds it hard to know where to settle and what to focus on. The shot needs more of a sense of story.
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Nice capture - Like the steam for mood.
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