the top of the glass bowl doesn't help at all, it almost looks like the picture is embossed. other than that, you've got a pretty nice composition set up.
I like this idea but feel that the glass bowl is cutting your shot up to the point of distraction. The light is a bit bright. This is not a bad shot by any means.
That line at the bottom is VERY distracting. Is it the rim of the bowl? Also, the choice of nicer clementines could have helped make this a GREAT picture. I like the comp. alot.
Seems slightly underexposed both on the skins and in the darkened shadows. Perhaps a tripod, smaller aperture and longer exposure would have yielded more vibrant colors by comparison. The current exposure tends to cause blown out areas. The background on lefthand side is dotted and distracting.