Very elegant, great colors and I love the narrow depth of field. I feel there is a bit too much going on in the top left corner and border area. I would crop away a very small part (approx 5%) of the left and the top, so the darkest parts visible in the border area are gone. It creates just a bit more rest in the picture.
Focus appears to be a little TOO soft here. A touch more lighting or a boost in levels would help to bring out the shadows more also. Nice composition!
TC
Beautiful subject, and kind of abstract looking. I think there are a few things that might have improved this... first and foremost, the piece that I think you are trying to focus on is dead center, it might have been better to crop more putting it perhaps in the bottom left hand corner? Also I feel that a slight bit more dof might have helped.
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