Very clever idea here! I like it. For a higher score, definetly go with the largest size allowed for the challenge. Sharpness is an issue, and this may have been due to the model moving slightly, or the focus might have been slightly farther away than the model. (Looks like the bottom of the 'wings' are in the focal plane, which I think was behind the model.) Again - very clever idea here, looking forward to seeing more!
This image is good, but it could have been exceptional, ribbon winner! First of all - so small! Second, not that I'm asking for absolute sharpness for the sake of it, but it is a bit too fuzzy. However - great idea, very good execution, and above all EXCEPTIONAL lighting, with both face and silhouette!