Actually, I would go with a smaller frame. The hands detract from the shot and the "pop" of her beauty. I would add just a bit more light and crop it to add some tension
I love the lighting, does wonders for the complexion. She's a stunning model and I imagine she'd be well pleased with this. Maybe another soft key light to the right to illuminate that side? Good work though.
when you filled in the frame some of the black leaked in. You should have the area selected so that won't happen. I find the crop a little odd. Her arms look like a detached pedestal on which the head is resting. Your composition is putting too much attention on her crinkly blouse. nice lighting, though.
Beautiful model, like the pose and the lighting feels even maybe a little too shadowy on the right of her face and I feel as if it's cropped a little too tight on the top. Otherwise great shot.