There isn't really a strong central focal point to the shot IMO. I'd have preferred a closer crop of one or a few of the people to make the shot more "about them". Having said that, I see why you shot the way you did (summer tableau etc) but if I'd taken that approach, I'd have used colour. Sorry, feel free to disagree!
Nice capture - Mis my Bulmers - Had some great nights on those!Wish there was a little more activity in the pic - The woman on the left with her back to us is pretty distracting too. Nice conversion though.