interesting composition, your center subject needs to be lifted within the frame to include her feet, the post-production contrast work has blown-out all the highlights to create that surreal feel
Hmm ... I didn't think that much of this on first viewing, gave it a 2 in fact ... but on reflection I think it's better than that. It is compelling in a way I cannot explain. Part composition. Part is the focus and the desat of the background. Part may be the "distressed" processing. I can't figure it out, but I'm bumping the score I gave.
The faces and especially the background are too washed out for my taste as opposed to the clothing that is lacking features. Maybe try less contrast and/or sharpness? The cyan features in the background are interesting. There is not much in the way of expressions on the faces.