tecnically the photo looks fine, nice b&w conversion with a good range in tones, I can't tell if the building is slanted or picture is, the roof tends to drop to the R. compositionally i see the relationship to the title and "postcards" but other than the girl there isn't much of interest. the building itself is very static with hard horizontal and vertical lines that may have been better if you'd tilted the camera to give a diagonal to them, another approach may have been to blur the girls motion to imply "lets get outta here" or something similar. hope this does well, you've got some nice ideas hear and good vision to see the opportunities too
im not sure if anybody could think of a better title for this, i always end up cutting people feet off too! not sure if you means it or not either way i couldnt care less. i really like this.
With the title it seems there would be some more focus on the girl. Looking at this picture the focus is the building, maybe the building wishes you were there. hehe. Good photo.
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