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lovely and mysterious. I gave this a 7.
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you have a nice story you are trying to tell but the angle/ perspective really needs to be moved so that child is more the main subject and not the goal post
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a very busy silihoute, needs to be sharper
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love this image .. the child only barely visible ... excellent ... =8
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this is a great contrejour however it would be much better if it was in focus
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i like the effect of the sun, but the rest of the shot is just a tad too soft and flat to be really effective, I think
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Sun is distracting but good photo.
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Awesome. Lighting, subject, darkeness, dying sun..
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Judgeing by the title the focus should be the child. That being said I would like to see more of him, crop tighter, less of the sky above the goal I think would be good. A different angle would work to get more of his body in the shot. I'd say play up the colors more also, this image has really dull colors.
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I like what you were going for...but, I feel like I need to see more of the child and what he's doing.
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Looks like the goal and the goalie are out of focus.
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a little too dark. I'd rather see the sun more blown out and a cleaner silhouette of the kid.
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A little too dark on the base...this loses a lot of the subject interest and story.
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