hmmmm...I like the idea, but it seems too staged. If he is struggling that much in the elements and his umbrella is ruined, why is the coat not taken by the wind as well?
Nicely done. It really feels like the wind is rushing by. But the telephone pole is a distraction, and the space to the right of the umbrella could have been cropped out.
I think this could use a tad more contrast so that the person doesn't look so dodged out, or the background so burned in, I like the pose but i think you could crop this tighter, the pole on the left is a little destracting and the centered composition is a tad stagnant i think
I think this needs a tighter crop. I also think it would make a great black and white. Under Advanced you could do some neat Dodge and Burn effects to a photo like this.