I like the visual pun, but as a photograph this is too messy and not well lighted. The focus should be on the cigarettes. I would guess that some thought went into placement of the objects, but what comes across is a casual snapshot.
Good idea, makes me think about it in a literal way, too. The scratch on the edge of the table(?) is a bit distracting and background is busy for my personal taste, too (removing the objects or shallower DOF would have helped, I think so). The ash-tray could be sharper, too, though the composition of it is good!
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