I like what you captured here, but needs a bit more editing to bring some more detail out of the shadows in my opinion. Feel free to PM me during or after the challenge if you want any PP help with it.
Well done. Good focus and detail. Crop is very tight, might benefit from opening it up a bit more. Maybe a bit more contrast would develop his personality a bit more, too.
I find the lighting a bit flat, but you've engaged him well and caught a nice moment. I think the cropping is fine, but I dont really care too much about the red jacket - this may have been stronger in b&w
The darkness in the eyes make it hard for me to see them. I the tone of the skin could be better and this image just doesn't have a zing it needs to make the face stand out.