Seems like there's just too much in this photo and it becomes cluttered. You seem to have numerous valid subject areas; I'd suggest a longer study on this subject with multiple exposures that tell smaller pieces of the visual story so that each section can have more impact.
For some reason, this shot doesn't seem as saturated as your shot on TrekEarth. It is still a magnificent photo and the first of this bunch that made me gasp a little in pleasure. You may have oversharpened it just a little, though. See the halo around the far rock and lighthouse? SUper work, Ron! 10
Excellent image. I like the colors in the sky and that you've captured a nice tonal range. Although not something you could change, I notice what look like telephone poles and that distracts (but they are small and not terribly intrusive). You composition emphasizes the lighthouse. 9