I like the high-key effect here... how everything is white-ish. But either it's slightly out of focus or some of the details have somehow been lost. Good try though!
Love the expression and composition. Really think that the image would have been a bit stronger had the face been a bit sharper IMO. Nice work non the less.
Very pretty. I'm glad to see that you didn't follow the masses and over saturate the eyes.
Now, go back and do this again, add a little hint of color to her hair and a very faint pink to her lips...print it, and you will sell hundreds of copies.
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