:: Critique Club ::
First off without reading your comments I have no idea what he is doing or what he is preparing for, what his part might be in the wedding. I think the song book could have been taken out of the shot, which seems to take your eyes away to read what it says. I think this shot would have worked better at a different angle to where you can see he has a guitar and show more seats, seeing that he is there all by himself. |