One Royal Copenhagen Egg
One Golden Spoon
One Bright White Egg Cup
And One giggling Teenager
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Place: 145 out of 153 Avg (all users): 4.6059 Avg (commenters): 5.6667 Avg (participants): 4.3846 Avg (non-participants): 4.7440 Views since voting: 841 Views during voting: 320 Votes: 203 Comments: 7 Favorites: 0
Camera Work/Technical: The first think that grabs the voters eye and makes them take notice is sharp focus. You look a little on the soft side here, and I am pretty sure that this was one aspect that pulled your score down.
Lighting: I like the mood you created with your lighting. Somehow, it fits very nicely with the working subject you have included.
Composition/Content: I like your initial composition, but the lettering needs some work. I think that I would have gone with a bolder font, and I absolutely would have left off that stroking of the letters.
My Opinion: You started with a neat idea and a great 'band' name. This one just needed a bit better execution in a few areas.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
The first and some say the best Danish ska band, the Poultry League was thought to have sold out in this, their major label debut. By singing in English, they were considered merely a novelty act by Americans. The title song turned into a very popular dance at Frat parties. Dancers would take turns in the center of crazed flappers, and would have to kiss the fifth chicken they counted.
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