Comp ok, light ok, made the rule of 6 for sports, emotional factor could be more heightened by seeing the runner or the catchers face, good stop action, nice movement, great lines, tonal value just on the edge, the whites are barely in, the blacks seem a bit deep, texture needs work, overall a good attempt
I like the choice of black and white. I might have cropped out the right side, though. All the interesting action is on the left and ends with the man in the middle of the frame. The right side seems stagnant. Otherwise a very nice photo.