nice Eyes. i would have taken this photo from farther back with a zoom type lense (or camera zoom). i would have framed it the same, but the perspective would be a little different. the main thing is, the nose would not seem to be so Huge.. also if you were farther away, you would be less likely to appear in the reflection, giving it a deeper feel... thats only my 2 cents
Focus on the eyes is great and the reflection of the photographer is fun (wonder how many times we could find that if we looked?). Could have used a bit more DOF to get the nose in focus; it's rather prominent for being OOF.