Welcome to DPC, and congratulations on your first submission. I hope you are not too discouraged from your first showing, and stay involved with the site - it really is the best place to learn.
I think you have had a lot of useful feedback already. Many people didn't feel that you had met the challenge (in their eyes at any rate). I cannot over-emphasise how important it is on this site to clearly meet the challenge. Many also found the image too out of focus. one of the reasons for this is the difficult lighting that you were working under - it would have been much easier with more light.
Please do take the time to mark the helpful comments you have recieved as helpful, to show your appreciation to the commenters.
It is my hope that these insights are helpful and constructive. Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique. And please remember to mark it "Helpful" if you found it so. Good luck with future challenges.
Uhm, I don't like the lighting, too bright on the left and too dark on the right. Furthermore, there's a lot of motion blur, which seems out of place in this particular picture. Somewhere in my mind four letters arise, but others might told you which already.. -1-
If you were going for a blurry shot of an eye... you captured it! Myself, if you were going to take a picture of an eye I would at least have had it in focus.
Over all this picture isn't very good. I don't understand what it has to do with the challenge, its blurrry, the lighting is too harsh, and shot is taken way to close-up. Sorry. Maybe next time.
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