man this looks like a really cool spot, like if i was to come into a bunch of money and i wanted to just get away, i would move there and hang out in a dark corner and write thing down in a tablet...
Great casual shot, gets across the atmosphere of the location very well. Normally I like to "see more" in the shadows, but the uneven lighting and darks spots work very well here for the subject.
Great capture, very moody, great detail on the main subjects. An interesting variation may be to crop down from the top, removing the bright lights and even some of the light on the picture and really focusing on the two main subjects.
Now this is just wonderful, and one can see they are enjoying themselves so much.
I love this as it also tells us a story.....
The mood is excellent with the light and dark tones, just right.....