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Excellent concept with an effective composition. The harsh contrast between the left and right side of his face hurts this for me, you may have been better off shooting from a different angle so it was more evenly lit. And perhaps you're camera's not capable of it, but I'd love to see a faster shutter speed on this to really stop the motion, it seems a tiny bit blurred.
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not quite sharp for me and was the water that cold
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Kind of discomforting... i'd be interested to see this with the bottom half cropped off and the whites changed to reds... but i'm odd like that.
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Maybe a tighter crop would help.
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Like the exspression, face needs to be sharper. Good luck
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great action being depicted here. I would have considered cropping the bottom - no wait, maybe not - his reflection adds an interesting element.
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focus looks a bit soft, and the right side of his face is a little dark, nice frame, and the color is good.
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not proper breaststroke technique, and out of focus... but i'll give you a 5
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