Originally posted by howzitboy: think the flash was a bit too much. id go for 1 stop or 2 stops less exposure and try get some directional lighting if can.
and, one more thing, the pose looks too "posed". too much tension on her shoulders. Id bring her hands a bit farther apart and have her not stick her chest out. |
I'd have to disagree on every count here. I think the things howzitboy says may be true from a traditionalist point of view, but this is a very contemporary, stylish photo, and with that in mind, I think this photograph is stunning. I could see it in The Fader, or XLR8R or something.
nice work
Message edited by author 2007-05-29 22:33:57. |