Very interesting image here. I personally would have liked to see richer blacks and lighter white tones here. Fun idea and I think the framing works will.
this is really nice and i am thinking that it would not work nearly as well in color...of course i dont know what they look like in color so i could just be talking out of my ass
This is better use of your new $400 macro lens.... i like the lines and angles however I would like you to add a curves adjust to this and get the blacks in and the whites up great shot though.
I'd try this again with a deeper depth of field, and a stronger contrast. I'd leave the lighter areas pretty much where they are, (maybe a TINY boost), but I'd certainly try and darken the shadows/black areas to add a little more feel and solidity. The over-all feel for me is that it's just too soft and light.