Greetings from the Critique Club
Gosh, that's a scary alley for Savanna! Or for anywhere, for that matter.
But that's the mood and effect you were going for, I think, and if so, you certainly succeeded. Well done.
I could tell you this is "too dark" or "too blurry" or "too ..." a lot of things, but I think that would defeat the purpose of your very fine image. From your portfolio, it's easy to see you know your way around a camera and you did not do any of these things by mistake.
So, despite the rather low score for this image (if you care about the score) I'd say keep following your imagination and ideas. You're doing fine. |