Greetings from the Critique Club.
Hi Thorgils,
Well done for going for such a different concept for your submission. IT's always a bit of a risk to try these sorts of things on DPC. Per the comments you have already recieved this is haunting, or a bit spooky - depending on how you interpret it. In this respect you have doen a greta job of layering the 'phantom' into the ruin in a convincing fashion. I only part a bit less convincing is the side of his face where his left eye is - because the background is much lighter there it looks a bit odd. I think the whole would have been better if you had shrunk the phantom and shifted him to the left a bit.
It is my hope that these insights are helpful and constructive. Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique. And please remember to mark it "Helpful" if you found it so. Good luck with future challenges.
Cheers
Paul |
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