I like the documentary feel to this image. The upper left is a little overexposed, but the composition is interesting, and it is kind of fun to find the water (finally) after looking around a bit.
Composition seem very busy. If you were to trim off the right side of the shot and just left the water contraption in the shot, your eyes would get a better flow. Right now your eyes wanter around trying to find a subject to focus on. Sometimes the simpler the picture the better the composition.
I see water, but this shot does not captivate me in any way. It's very busy with no particular focal point, and the subject lacks interest itself. A more dynamic point of view may have helped here getting closer to the subject too.
Lot of potential with this shot...seems too busy on the right with a lot of clutter while left side is gray and nondescriptive. A lower shot face on to the spouts might be better?
This shot is very busy! It has many different layers made up of textures, colors, lines. It is confusing to the eye. Also the theme of the shot (water) is kind of hidden in the shot.
TC
This is a well taken image, but the subject seems to be too much. Maybe focusing on one of the water sources instead of trying to include them both would help to reduce the complexity
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