OK. I will try to be constructive here as much as possible.
The imags are initially poorly executed. The background would of been better if it had been plain instead of using a curtain with folds. it makes it look very amateurish.
Next, the lighting doesnt really work, too red? poor white balance? not quite sure.
OK, the angle of the 2 side panel shots doesnt do it justice. You are shooting from slightly below. headhight would of been an improvement.
However, the general concept is good, but it would of been better if you could of used a model of sorts (a friend? relative?) I think I know who is in the shot and if you are who I think you are, I know you are capable of much better work than this. sorry, but its a 4.
(probaly the longest commen you have received this challenge I'd imagine!) |
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