Built from three seperate images of an usually cooperative model.
All shot in raw @ f5.6, 1/60, ISO 200.
In DPP: adjust white balance, curves, save Tiff.
In PS: Combined three images, cloned out some distracting items, layers added, converted to B&W, resize, USM, save for web.
Statistics
Place: 29 out of 244 Avg (all users): 6.4167 Avg (commenters): 7.3889 Avg (participants): 6.3673 Avg (non-participants): 6.4576 Views since voting: 2171 Views during voting: 516 Votes: 216 Comments: 22 Favorites: 7 (view)
Very nicely done, and one of the favorite songs at our house, I might add.
Compositionally, I like how you have used the white frame to emphasize the individual body parts. This adds an element of interest to the shot. Also, I like how that it is not obvious that it is three separate pictures, but rather he looks stacked "on top of himself"
Technically, it is also well done. There are details visible, no obvious 'blowouts,' and the lighting is nice and even. While it may not be incredibly dramatic, it is clean and helps to convey your message clearly. It does seem a bit flat to me though, even though you seem to have clear blacks and whites and tones in between. I'm not sure that bw works best for this shot (having not seen the color version, I definitely don't know) but I could see how this shot could be interesting with a bright background and complimentary colored shorts or something.
Nicely done, and a good showing.
If I need to further clarify or explain myself, please feel free to contact me.
AWESOME! Absolutely love it! Maybe lighten up the frames to pure white so they stand out a little more but I'd give it a 10 if they would let me vote! haha
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
Photographer found comment helpful.
