I would change lighting (from the front instead of the back), better focus (on them, not on the computer screen) and post-process to reduce noise.. As it is, I give it a 2
Out of focus and dont like the colour. Maybe you could have done more of a silouette (spelling?) effect and tried to make the subjects more accurately symmetrical.
if the orange was peeled partly it would be better. the whole picture looks like tomato soup.joke:"what is that girl doing in my soup?" "she is trying to catch the fly." i give you 9! this picture has the light of dreams