Greetings from the Critique Club!
Welcome to DPC! I see that this is your first entry in a challenge...that's the hardest part, entering for the first time.
The image fits the challenge and the title adds a bit of humor and dimension. I like the way you played with light-writing to create the subject...it really feels like Pi has been branded on the wood wall.
Unfortunately the focus feels soft and since your aperature was small enough to create a large depth of field I can only guess that either the camera support shook during the exposure or something else mysterious happened to create the blur.
A square crop might have helped to emphasize the circle in your composition since the black areas at top and bottom don't add to the story.
Overall, a fine first photo to enter! Don't let the scores discourage you...DPC voters are harsh critics and a "6" is considered fairly awesome here.
Keep shooting!
--Kadi |
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