This is a nice shot except that the background light is so bright that it just wipes everything else out. It took me several seconds to even figure out what I was looking at. I would LOVE to see this shot again but with a dimmer backlight to reduce the glare.
Good idea but not executed well enough for my taste, the strong flare from the lightsource really bothers me. Also I would either just want to see them totally silhouetted or lit more, this is sort of in between so lighting could have been better. Gave a 5.