Greetings from the Critique Club
Hello! I spent a long time looking at your interesting abstract wondering why it received such a low score. It's an abstract into which one can read many interpretations. Right now, I see a dancing figure.
Then, the light dawned: the Challenge asked us to illustrate the Rule of Thirds, and your composition has as its main attraction that nice design of white smack in the middle of the image.
Technically, I like the good definition in the bricks and the color is really good. It's a pleasing piece to look at and (imo)it surely would have received a higher score if it came closer to an interpretation of the Challenge.
I really like the way your imagination functions. Keep 'em coming!
SFAlice |