Greetings from the Critique Club!
What a fun photograph! I love your subject's expression. The back wall kind of detracts from the photograph a bit, especially the black line near the corner, and I wonder if a tighter crop might have improved this photograph a bit. In particular, you might try a square crop, cropping just above your model's head and about halfway across the frame right to left.
Your post-processing seems a bit "muddy" to me. I would have preferred to see a curves adjustment to allow for more contrast in the mid-range, and perhaps to lighten your subject's face just a touch. In any case, this is a fun and enjoyable photograph that brought a smile to my face.
~Terry |
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