An interesting idea and good pattern study. I find the lighting you chose works against this though. The overexposed areas are distracting, and yet many of the other areas of the glass are too dark. Actually, if I hold a sheet of paper over the left 1/3 or more where most of the overexposed area is, it looks like that might have been a good crop.
This photo looks very busy to me. Maybe isolating one or two of the triangles could have helped to simplify it enough to stand out in terms of shape and composition. The way it is now, it's hard to find a spot to rest your eyes on. It's not abstract enough, but I cannot guess what it is at all.
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