I think this would have been better if you had got closer into the subject. Framing just the bubbles and the mans face and cutting out the lower body that does nothing for the story would have given it more intimacy.
Excellent lighting against a dark background. The bubbles look out of focus (may be just a side-effect of the lighting). His hand obscures his mouth. Perhaps holding his right hand thumb-out and holding wand lower would allow his mouth to be in the picture.
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