This looks like it would be really cool! I'm guessing that you are holding a flashlight with your hair over it? Well, here is my two cents. :)
First of all, it's out of focus. If you can fix that, and get a focused image, it will get you a much better photo, and thus a much better score with the voters! Secondly, all the red tones are really cool, but there's almost a little bit too much of it. Taking the saturation down a tiny bit might help with that.
I like the centered composition you used - usually I try to avoid centered compositions - but in my opinion, it worked well here! This is a cool idea for the challenge, it just needs a little technical work. Keep shooting! :) |