Very interesting composition here - kind of like it! It is a little bit out of focus here though. :( If you fix that, and maybe add a little more contrast perhaps, this would be a very nice photo! Good try! :)
Looks washed out/dull. Try adding some contrast and maybe even saturating the colours here. Maybe even a closer crop to get rid of that ugly coloured background. Sharpen the eyes more.
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