The shot seems good enough, but I don't like your treatment of the subject and background. The angle of the subject and the view don't show me much. The gravely background is, well, nasty. I don't really know what to suggest, but mabye some different setups. On it's wheels with a prudy background might make a nice contrast, or a plain background to pull attension to it. 6 Swash
I had the idea of a wagon, but didn't have a wagon, so I'm glad someone was able to doit. I wonder why you shot it on it's side rather than standing up. Was it to represent lost childhood, as the title kind of represents? The lighting and angle are good. The focus is great and I like the rocks being in the background. That little leaf/weed kind of adds a little bit of color to the photo. Great job and good luck in the challenge.
Reminds me of the William Carlos Williams poem (//www.library.utoronto.ca/utel/rp/poems/wcw7.html). Touching, nostalgic, and nicely colored in these muted, soft reds and rusts.
You know I have a hard time figuring this one out. No idea what I'm looking at. BTW, the correct spelling is " it's". Neither the composition, the color scheme or the props have great visual appeal to me. Sorry. Journey
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