You have an excellent idea here, but I would stand in front of the lightpost to keep it out of the shot. I love the angle on the building, but the photo is still too small. I hope you received the PM I sent you on a quick fix for resizing big photos. I am not receiving my PM's for some reason, but I have my email posted on my profile page, feel free to contact me, and don't give up snapping those photos.
When you look at the competition in this challenge it should be clear why this would have a hard time scoring well. it lacks creativity and appears more so as a snapshot rather than a challenge entry.
this looks like little thought was put into this image ... the lamppost cutting into the building and the tilted horizon are hurting this ... I'm trying to figure out exactly what your main subject is ...