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I really like the idea you started with, but I have one small aspect that I think complicates this image unnecessarily. The portion of breast (arm, possibly?) at the upper center portion of the picture takes, for me, enough of the focus away from the belly as to be noticeably distracting. I like the way the light kind of bleeds the belly into the background -- blurring the line between the two -- by creating such a strong highlight on the skin. There's some strong possible metaphors there, at least in my world view. I also think this would like a lot nicer larger than it currently is -- and I suspect you have a number of people telling you this as well. Good luck. |