Well I like the panorama framing. I do dislike the heavy grain/lack of image quality and your score will suffer as you did not make the most of the allowed 720 pixles.
This actually doesn't work for me, but I think it has the potential to be a great shot. The power lines in the foreground are very distracting and detract from the main image of the city skyline. I like the grain/noise you have going, and perhaps my whole impression of the shot would change if I could see it larger in the vertical. (I know you maxed out the dimension horizontally. Might have been better to crop off the right quarter in order to get more horizontal space.) It is hard to tell if the hazy/gritty impression comes just from the grain or whether there is a lot of haze in the shot. Either way a lot of detail is just washed out. If you have the chance to reshoot I also might suggest waiting until dusk/early evening when you might get the lights from the city to come out.
some crit: your horizon is crooked, the quality is low, the foreground is too dark... there are alot of reasons why this wont score well. Browse the forums, theres tons on these subjects to help you improve!
Don't know where to start. Photo is pourly exposed and extremely grainy not sure what effect you was attemted if any. No detail and lack of color. All in all looks like a pour exposure.