Great shot! The only correectable thing I can find here is the composition is not symetric. I would have made the cards symetric but who knows - maybe it would just spoil the picture. (9)
The cropped finger and the lack of balance either side of the credit cards are issues. With respect to the model and to women everywhere, I think that a female model would work in some humour.
Nice idea, I like the use of DOF. Wish the sheet (?) in the back were less winkled/more evenly lit. My eyes keep wandering up and trying to make sense of those blurry shapes
Great idea for the challenge. Not crazy for the smudge/dirt on the left side card..and the partial finger. Hope this doesn't sound too picky. :) I gave this an 8 and think it will do well. Good luck.