first off, it is very nice to see a mannequin with a head....and the shot of the mannequin is very good.....the overall image suffers from the drab and somewhat undefined background....it is apparent it is a clothing or department store but it took me too long to see that....see my eye goes driectly to the 'Buffalo' picture/ad and I'm more interested in what is going on there....
This is the kind of picture that keeps you looking to figure out what the message is. The images are interesting, and the photo is well composed to draw interest into it.
I like the idea of taking a picture of a shop window, but there really isn't much of interest in this window. It looks like a shoe store based on the background, - a more glamorous (ie, pricey) store window might get the point across a little better.
Mabe I would have felt the shopping urge more if the shoes/clothes in the wall at the back were the subject instead of the manequin? Nice focus and use of existing lighting, and I like the composition. Good photo - just doesn't have a big "money" impact.